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Yep, I can definitely see the resemblance here. It uses the type of chords I use in tracks and the beat. Try and tone down the flanger though.

Squeegee4554 responds:

Ok, thanks. :)

This is a very good track, but there are some things I'd like to point out:

Imagine performing live, the crowd is cheering, the cameras focused on you, waiting for the drop. When it comes, people will want to jump up and down, dance and really feel the crescendo. That's what this drop seems to lack. It's a good drop, don't get me wrong, but it needs a bit more "oomph" to it.

Also, the saw synth that enters at the beginning I think should have come in a bit later and be part of the build up to the drop: use some lighter synths and instruments for the intro and slowly build up.

Apart from that, it's pretty good! If you need help just ask!

Squeegee4554 responds:

Ok! Thanks!

Hey! This is one of your best!

The melody is very well structured, but the distorted bass that fades in half-way can sometimes clash, so be careful with that. The drop is great, with a solid, continuous beat and bassline throughout. Of course it's not perfect, but no song is!

Great work, and happy new year!

Squeegee4554 responds:

Ok! Thanks, and on your track, it just sounds like Progressive Trance/ House

Personally, I think at the start you should keep it just to the main melody and slowly layer the tracks as it builds. It does get ever so slightly tedious by the end; try to alter the melodies and beats to create a track with lots of different sections and melodies to keep the listener entranced.

Just my opinion!

Squeegee4554 responds:

Ok. I'll put in some more interesting parts in the build up. I have to say, Vocals would be cool!

This is amazing! Only problem is that the backing is a little bit crazy. Being someone who makes music as well, I think you should compress the dubsteppy synth and spend more time on the beat and bass. Also add a small bit of reverb to the voice to make it sound fuller.

Just my opinion!

Really liked this, though this isn't trance. Trance is a form of rave music, with driving basslines and people bouncing up and down to it. This is more of a melodic track, and is absolutely lovely. Though maybe you should change the genre tag on the song!

OiPriPri responds:

ahhyeah I was kindof tired last night when I posted this. Sadly their is no genere of suchs on newgrounds. But I'll put it under cinematic hence the flow of ze trackz

This is a really good track! Though personally I think the drop should alternate the melody a little bit. Make it more varied. Then it would be even better!

Squeegee4554 responds:

Ok. Thanks!

I'm a teenage kid who wants to be a music producer when I'm older, so please do check out my music!

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